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Post  -- Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:40 pm

pretty much xD

"Still, Shadow. Cinder needs her freedom, so do you. You guys dont have to be together 24/7" sh said with a little chuckle. "I know i wouldn't, probably no other wolf would, too" she added. And at that, Cinder came back with a giant male elk. "Fresh kill!" she said through the mouthful. When she dropped it, she glared at Shadow, and started eating, Makita at her side. "This is our side of the carcuss, Shadow! You get the other side." Cinder said with a growl.

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Post  tatsu-okami Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:57 pm

Shadow looked mournfully at the ground; "Take the whole thing; I can tell you think I don't deserve it," he said sadly, turning away and looking out of the mouth of the cave, his ears flattened.
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Post  -- Tue Aug 11, 2009 8:37 pm

Why's he so soft? xP
"Fine. Starve. You're already weak." Cinder said, eating the intire elk before Shadow could get some, bones and everything, of course, with the help of Makita.

Ok, we should get going, Makita. and shadow, fend for youself. You can come with us, but i won't hunt for you, carry you, sleep with you, nothing." she said with strong annoyance, which made her speak fast.

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Post  tatsu-okami Tue Aug 11, 2009 8:53 pm

He's like Balto in the sense that he's mostly a softie; he just hates conflict, unless it involves him beating the crap out of Steele xP

Shadow's emotions took an even deeper dive, and he got up, staring back at Cinder and Makita, his eyes watering. "Why should I go with you? It's obvious I'm not a worthy mate; maybe you should have just let me die when you first saw me," he told Cinder. Right before he turned away to look out of the cave, his eyes showed a flash of rage that had never been displayed before, but it died within seconds, and he did his best to avoid breaking down in front of the duo.
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Post  -- Wed Aug 12, 2009 9:43 pm

Cinder looked at him with shock. "Geeze Shadow, you go WAAAY to far to the extremes! Well, I'm letting you tag along becase heck, you made it THIS far, I thought you could go even farther, but if you DON"T want to come, then, stay. I would not put up with this attitude."

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Post  tatsu-okami Wed Aug 12, 2009 10:02 pm

Shadow hung his head miserably; "I don't mean to act like this, Cinder. It's just getting really hard on me when you seem to perceive how thankful I am for you, and how much I love you, in all the wrong ways," he said hoarsely. Tears started flowing down his muzzle and dropping into the snow in front of him; he tried his best not to show that he was crying now, in front of these two, but he knew they could just as easily smell what was going on.
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Post  -- Wed Aug 12, 2009 10:23 pm

Cinder looked at him with sarcastic pity, then real pity, when she saw him crying. "I care about you to, you know. and it really freaked me when i saw you half-dead on the floor, I didn't expect you to come and follow me, and you didn't even thank so say bye to the Bear Healer!! All you thought about was me!! Just do something for your own good, well-being, and health. It's not ALL love, otherwise i would'nt like it!! There's more to life than just love: happiness, hunting, fighting, defending what is yours, but then yet again that has to do with love too, I DON"T FREAKING KNOW!!!!" she screamed finally and turned away and started walking slowly.

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Post  tatsu-okami Wed Aug 12, 2009 10:36 pm

Shadow, who had been looking at Cinder as she spoke, hung his head again and sobbed quietly; she didn't know how he felt that he owed her so much, and they were now being torn away from each other. It was making him wonder if he should have just stayed how he was until he met Cinder; not caring what any females thought about him, avoiding them and only looking out for himself.
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Post  -- Thu Aug 13, 2009 6:00 pm

Makita wasn't sure wqhat to do, but follow Cinder.

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Post  tatsu-okami Thu Aug 13, 2009 6:06 pm

Shadow sat there for a moment, then picked himself up, following the two.
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Post  -- Thu Aug 13, 2009 7:36 pm

Cinder wasn't annoyed by Shadow, so she didn't protest.

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Post  tatsu-okami Thu Aug 13, 2009 7:38 pm

Another more subtle thing was going through Shadow's mind: he never wanted to kill anything except in self-defense, which made him wonder if he would be able to hunt as effectively as Cinder and Makita, who likely did not have this weakness of heart.


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Post  -- Thu Aug 13, 2009 8:32 pm

soo.. shadow's goona kill Cinder?!

Cinder was still walking slowly, with her head down. Makita was on watch. She saw Shadow lokking at them meanly, and braced herself.

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Post  tatsu-okami Thu Aug 13, 2009 9:05 pm

uhhh... no o_O I accidentally left something out of the post; that's why it was weird xD
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Post  -- Fri Aug 14, 2009 11:10 pm

Ok i feel a little better xD I was actually frightened for a moment there Oo

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Post  tatsu-okami Sat Aug 15, 2009 3:20 am

Yep, I corrected it now XD
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Post  -- Sat Aug 15, 2009 3:08 pm

Ohhh... to try to qin the pretty girls back, huh? xD

Come on Shadow, ya coming?" Cinder shouted from behind her back.

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Post  tatsu-okami Sat Aug 15, 2009 3:19 pm

Nooo.. o_O I just forgot to say that Shadow isn't sure if he'll be good at hunting, since Balto told him never to harm anything except in self-defense (with the exception of Steele XD )


Shadow did not say anything, but trotted faster to catch up.
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Post  -- Sat Aug 15, 2009 3:43 pm

Ohhh... make yourself clear the first time!!! XD

The two just continued walking along...

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Post  tatsu-okami Sat Aug 15, 2009 3:49 pm

Shadow trotted slightly behind Cinder and Makita; he had been constantly wondering since they had left the cave: was it Cinder that was making their relationship so rocky, or was it him?
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Post  -- Sun Aug 16, 2009 5:43 pm

After a few more hours, it was dark. "Where should we sleep?" Cinder said very tired

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Post  tatsu-okami Sun Aug 16, 2009 8:32 pm

Shadow looked around; "There aren't that many places, unless you're keen on heading up in the trees," he joked.
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Post  -- Sun Aug 16, 2009 8:41 pm

Cinder looked at him annoyed. "You can, yeah. But not us. But it's not my fault if you tear your leg even more."

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Post  tatsu-okami Sun Aug 16, 2009 9:07 pm

Shadow looked back at the ground; "Well, pardon me for trying to lighten the mood," he growled.
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Post  -- Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:22 pm

cinder looked at him them tured rolling her eyes.

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